Criticism: The title 'Kick Off' comes across as too violent.
Improvement: The name has now been changed too 'Match Day'- which is still relevant to the genre yet not as aggressive.
Criticism: The name of our company logo- 'New School Productions'.
Improvement: The name has now been changed to 'Old School Productions' as it sounds more traditional and less 'cheesy'.
Criticism: The use of ellipses/dashes on our titles.
Improvement: The ellipses and dashes have been removed from all the titles, therefore following conventions of our influential films as well as making our titles look more professional.
Criticism: The end title 'Kick-Off' appearing on a moving image.
Improvement: The end title, now 'Match Day', appears on a block background which therefore makes the end title more presentable.
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