Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Feedback For Second Draft

Titles-Remove black lines lines around the white text as it doesn't follow conventions.

Company Logo- Addition of another company logo as majority have more than one major studio involved.

Sound- Mute all video clips as camera movement can be heard.

Clip order- Move the split-screen further back as not all the characters are properly introduced and so the continuity is affected.

Split-Screen- Make sure the split-screens are of equal height making them look more professionally done.

Produced by Luke Payne

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